So the script is just about set. I'm very happy with the beginning. That first paragraph has enough details of the situation, past and present, with a nice hint of mystery, tension and darkness. In the video I read from the script some of the new dialogue. I pasted that part of the script here as well, so read along and enjoy!
By Paul Saucido
Cemetery. A dark figure looms over a gravestone. Dressed to the nines, the figure does a 360, smiles.
Can you believe this? Yeah, you can. Rose got it altered, special. Just for today. I, wanted to come, pay my respects, you know? I wanted to share, this moment, with you, Georgie. Georgie Pants. I can’t stay too long, everyone is waiting for me. But I just wanted to thank you. You were the best friend I ever had. You were the closest thing I had a to a brother, and your Pops, became a father to me after your passing.
Titi crosses himself.